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Picture the scene,
Like as a dream
Rain drops halo

The lone lamps glow.

The platform glistens
as the puddles flow,
The darkness listens
as the announcement begins.
The shadows reform

Below the lone light

Shaping a figure,
as black as the night.
He waits alone,
Weary and wet,
as the train rolls in
with a hiss of steam.
A shaft of light,
As the doors slide apart,
Dulled by the downpour
'till it's bright no more.
Picture the scene,
Like as a dream.
He steps aboard
and goes where he's been...
©2005-2009 ~CloveSmokeCatharis
:iconclovesmokecatharis:

Author's Comments

I finished my Art exam 4 hours early, so i had to really drag this out...
There is a metaphor behind this, but if i said what it was it'd spoil the fun.

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:icongonexupxinxflames:
this is great in its simplicity..the last line is my favorite :)

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"While the rest of the species is descended from apes, redheads are decended from cats." - mark twain
:iconxpythonx:
Like I said, awsome.

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No one can make you feel inferior without your consent
:iconclovesmokecatharis:
thanks

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When the director sold the show, Who bought it's last rites? They cut the cast, the music, and the lights. This is my line. This is eternal...
:iconclovesmokecatharis:
:hug:

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When the director sold the show, Who bought it's last rites? They cut the cast, the music, and the lights. This is my line. This is eternal...
:iconxpythonx:
:aww:

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No one can make you feel inferior without your consent
:iconteh-luse:
groovy bananas. pretty damn kwl.

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[x] We'll Love Again and We'll Laugh Again,
We'll Cry Again and We'll Dance Again... [x]
:iconclovesmokecatharis:
Thanks

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When the director sold the show, Who bought it's last rites? They cut the cast, the music, and the lights. This is my line. This is eternal...
:iconmogjitsu:
Wow, really good. Very graphic as well, can easily imagine all of it.
:iconclovesmokecatharis:
cheers jude

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When the director sold the show, Who bought it's last rites? They cut the cast, the music, and the lights. This is my line. This is eternal...

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